The Ice Storm
The ice storm came down on the town like a bout of depression. It started on Saturday and ended Monday. The day the ice melted is suspended, as it changes from person to person.
The ice storm came in the night and left the roads choked and slushed. The ground became frozen sponges beneath people’s feet. Dogs turned to popsicles and teenage lovers were sealed in their parents’ cars.
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Lucas, I really enjoyed this short piece-- although you are not done. I actually think it would make a great poem. (Sorry, maybe I am just stuck in poetry world over here). But yeah, I really like it. I enjoyed the last sentence.... I hope to see you finish the piece!
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